Thursday, October 29, 2009

Robert’s Thoughts

In my opinion homework is bad. There are three reasons why homework is bad. In the next four paragraphs I will tell you why homework is bad. So read on to the next paragraph.

Homework is bad because homework makes for heavier backpacks. This leads to hunchbacks and to messy back packs. Then because of the messy backpacks we get a crumpled paper. We go to class and the teacher wont except the crumpled paper and we have to do it again. That is one reason homework is bad.

We go to school and work all day then we go home and we work some more! We work on long tedious assignments. We are bored to death. We email it to the teacher and he says he never got it! This is another reason not to give home work.

     Some times we have little to no free time because of home work. Some problems take a long time. We have to walk to school. We have to carry a heavy backpack. We have to get an early start.

     These are the three main reasons that home work is bad. If you want to help all children you should assign less home work. Then kids would have more fun. And you would stop messy back packs. These are the reasons not to assign home work.


 

5 comments:

  1. You express your thoughts pretty good! - J.L

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  2. You really express your thoughts

    -Lacie J.

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  3. Dont use homework is bad so many times. Find different words to use at the beginging of the sentences. Find soem better arguments. Use mores details.

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  4. You wrote one thingover and over if you could fix that the essay would be good and you need to get better aguments.
    It was okay but you need arguments and defend them better.
    -Marvin

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  5. This is a very good essay
    signed Robert

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