I love Hawaii too I think that your paragraph would have been better if it was longer and if it had more detail but otherwise it was interesting - Nayeli
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I love Hawaii too I think that your paragraph would have been better if it was longer and if it had more detail but otherwise it was interesting - Nayeli
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