Wednesday, April 14, 2010

Niki’s Vacation

By Niki

This is my favorite vacation. When we went to Hawaii. We got to do everything I wanted to do.

This is what I wanted to do. We went surfing. And got to go to parties and swim with dolphins.

And that is what I would do if I went to Hawaii.

1 comment:

  1. I love Hawaii too I think that your paragraph would have been better if it was longer and if it had more detail but otherwise it was interesting - Nayeli

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