Wednesday, February 3, 2010

A Movie Production?

By Abby

Her laughter broke the silence. She was standing atop of the bookcase in a superhero stance. She looked around the room at all of her victims. "Nobody moves…or else…" She said in a little squeaky voice. Everybody laughed at how little her voice was compared to how big she looked. Her voice sounded as if it was a little 5 year old girl's voice. Even though her voice was little she was tough. After telling everyone not to move she jumped down from the bookcase onto the ground. Everybody gasped at how short she really was. She looked like her head was only 3 feet from the ground and like a furious midget. The looked on her face scared us all to jumping back a few steps.

    After looking at all of us individually from where she stood she jumped back atop the bookcase. She told everyone, "I am taking you all captive except for those of you who I have chosen to be my minions. Those of you who I am taking captive will come with me right now to my lair." Everybody gasped when she said that because they didn't know who was going with the girl and who was becoming a minion. "I will give you all 5 minutes to say goodbye to your loved ones before I take you, but now I must tell you who the people are becoming my minions," She said slowly. "First you," she said pointing to a guy with gray hair and big glasses, "will not be becoming one of my minions but being captured."

    Everyone who got captured got tied to a pole while the minions went with the girl. Most of the minions were younger people that were between the ages of 5 and 25. All the elders were the ones who got captured and tied to the pole.
    While the minions and the girl were walking out the door of the building all the older kids had to comport the younger kids. Everyone was hysterical and didn't want to be separated from their loved ones, but they had to…or else. Once the girl and her minions were out of the building the girl took off her mask to show that she was just a very little girl.

    After that everyone just walked away to get coffee and donuts. Why, may you be asking that everyone just left? The answer to that question is…this was all a part of a movie. So everyone in the movie theater got up to leave because they thought the movie was boring and stupid now. The part where everyone walked off to get coffee and donuts wasn't supposed to be in the movie, but they had left the camera rolling the whole time. They had accidentally taped everything behind the scenes that was going on and then didn't edit the movie before they put it in theaters.

    As everyone got up to leave they heard laughter in which startled them. They all stopped at the entrance to realize that the villain from the movie had come to get them next…

1 comment:

  1. Good essay but you should really check grammer like in the first paragrph. THE LOOKED ON HER FACE. Come on you are better than this.
    Brad

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