Thursday, March 18, 2010

Edgar’s Story

By Edgar

Last night the movie I was watching was a disgrace it was not nonfiction but still not that funny because the characters were talking nonsense.

The next day in school I was having bad luck in school my teacher maid me reuwrite I tried to disagree but the teacher still maid me do it all over again.


 

1 comment:

  1. you spelled rewrite wrong and I think you could have added a little more punctuation but I liked it other than that.
    -Lacie

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